You are flying through the air, the sound of wind whistling in your ears. You hear screams next to you and the sound of the wheels on your car screeching against the metal track. As you shoot through the air, you smell popcorn and cotton candy far below. If you are brave enough to open your eyes, you see the world going past you in a blur. You see people smiling, screaming, and laughing. Just in front of you is the shiny hood of the car, piercing the air. You can taste the air and everything in it, because your mouth is probably open. Your hands tightly grip the smooth rubber of the safety bar that is sticky from a lot of use by people who had eaten cotton candy before departing on the thrill ride.
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i liked how you added every detail about your surroundings.
"You see people smiling, screaming, and laughing. Just in front of you is the shiny hood of the car, piercing the air."
and also how you said that the world was going past you in the air it was just pretty descriptive."If you are brave enough to open your eyes, you see the world going past you in a blur."
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