Thursday, August 23, 2007

Quick Write Fruit Roll Up

The Fruit Roll Up I ate was dark blue with some uneven purple streaks going through it. It looks sort of like plastic and is shiny. Also, if you ever have looked into green sea water, the roll up looks like sea water with oil in it. It smells fruity and artificial, and smells like raspberry's. The wrapper that it was in crackled when you pressed on it. It sort of sounded like popcorn popping. The roll up is surrounded by a plastic sheet inside the wrapper, and when you pull it off it sounds like something is tearing. It is smooth and sticky to the touch. It tastes artificial and like raspberry. When it sticks to the inside of your mouth, it feels like the anesthetic that you get at dentists offices.

3 comments:

Varun said...

The Fruit Roll Up I ate was dark blue with some uneven purple streaks going through it. It looks sort of like plastic and is shiny. Also, if you ever have looked into green sea water, the roll up looks like sea water with oil in it. It smells fruity and artificial, and smells like raspberry's. When you pressed on the wrapper it crackled. It sort of sounded like popcorn popping. The roll up is surrounded by a plastic sheet that was inside the wrapper, and when you pull it off it sounds like something is tearing. The feel of it is smooth and sticky to the touch. It has an artificial taste like raspberry. When it sticks to the inside of your mouth, it feels like the anesthetic that you get at dentists offices.

chris said...

it really made me think about the sea as you mentioned in your post and i tried too picture it too.i have never seen anything like that before but i think that you created an image for me. but i don't think it smells like raspberry because it is blue and says blueberry on the cover.:)

khujista said...

Vishal,when you described what kind of roll you had,i could really imagine what kind of it was.The color,the sound the wrapper made etc.everything was so visual.I like the way you described it.